Kia ora, I am a student at Belfast School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share and Grow.
Wednesday, June 12, 2019
3 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
Hello, my name is Gus and I liked the way you created the rainbow on your creation. But next time, could you not color the character?
ReplyDeleteThis reminded me of the day where outside there was a brightly coloured rainbow outside. Could you please make the rainbow lighter?
How come there is always the two pictures, one with “ Welcome “, and one with ‘Belfast school’ ?
Next time, you could add more stuff to your blog.
ReplyDeleteHi again Marco, I am Tristan from Waikowhai Primary School.
I enjoyed looking at your fing. I hope to see more of your work
I thought it was awesome that you used lots of colours! I also liked the start slide show and the background.
Help maybe you could add more colours, like red , purple and silver.
Thanks for sharing your work with me. Here is my blog link: Tristan @ Waikowhai Primary https://www.blogger.com/blogger.g?blogID=2037508683630571405#allposts
Please check it out. -Tristan
Oops here is my link to my post https://wpstristanr.blogspot.com/
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